Offer concrete information, engage us with moment-to-moment details, tell us about each detail, and how they affect the senses.One of the most practical — and indeed, easiest — ways of laying out a descriptive foundation is to envision each scene before you write it.
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The more detailed and rich your descriptions, the better your writing will approximate the human experience, thereby establishing a connection with fellow minds.
The best descriptions are the ones that are completely original, easily understood and often reminisced.
Not only is this new sentence more specific, it brings in a few common experiences associated with heat (sticky skin, broiling parking lots), thereby placing readers into the action and increasing the chances of an empathic response.